Low-lit Spaces

Two crystal whiskey glasses and a lit candle on a wooden table near a fireplace.

There’s a vintage couch

in the corner of a whisky bar

and I’m drinking you in,

slowly, solemnly,

in a light like melted honey.

Sitting across from me,

you’re an evanescent ember of being.  

Low-lit spaces,

for low-lit faces

and fragmentations of light

that flicker and fade;

fragmentations that take you on an inward journey

and simmer so softly with delight.  

You’re like a folk song, played in Norway,

at the whimsy of fantastical creatures.

You’re like a rough-cut quartz rock,

pulled from a local river,

now dangling from an outstretched neck,

capturing tricks of light

as you gesture with a whisky glass in hand.

But the flame is soft

and the light can turn quickly,

in these corners with yellow-filled hue.

The blackness flickers,

against the golden-lit embers,

and we trip up,

we strip down and

we are taken back a step.

What can be found within the black void?

We wonder, tempted by its endless depth.

Can we drink it, too,

from a cup that evaporates into thin air

at the sense of human touch?

It’s a memory now,

these inner-city dwellings,

where we once sat.


It’s a memory now,

these warm feelings in

cosy dim-lit corners.


It’s a memory now, you and I,

sitting across from each other.

The blackness has set in

and I can only sit in dimly lit in corners

on my own.

I called you up last night,

but you forgot to take me home.

Two crystal whiskey glasses and a lit candle on a wooden table near a fireplace.

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